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The Mal-contentment Circle

Written by Irfan Shah | Thu, Jun 19, 2008

Poems

Becoming a dervish whirling in a blissful peaceful trance is what I sought, what I sought
In a web of never-ending superficial zeals am I caught, am I caught

To make both sides lose a never-ending war isn’t why we fought, why we fought
Need not for this ‘ache-medal incised beneath the chest’ we got, we got

So after all the quests, we roam in a devilish circle, the mal-contentment circle
Calling it a miracle; thinking it would be blissful, it would be blissful

All these needs and wants of this breed and creed, this breed and creed
How to kill this seed and how not to feed our greed, feed our greed?

When stuck in a circle, it doesn’t matter if you succeed, if you succeed
This kneeled fast speed and fake glory-bleed - doesn’t it make you feel emptied, feel emptied?

Such a sham but agonizing state… how do you narrate, just how could you narrate?
When, like an octopus around your neck, the successes suffocate, the successes suffocate

In such a shaby rush, there are no right ways, there are no wrong ways
Like a dancing, loving blessing… the trap just sways, the trap just sways

All those goals making you a slave to this dark hole, this dark hole
Let’s leave all this cajole, set on fire thy false soul, thy false soul

Those ache-medals we gave each other, burn them all with no remorse, with no remorse
Disowning these hurdles, fly away from this course, fly above this course

For, who knows… from the rusted coffins of this utter gloom, this utter gloom
Melancholic phoenix of true joy may bloom, serene joy may bloom

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5 Comments For This Post

  1. Hazan Ozgul Says:

    Although i came to know that most of your friends made the last two lines their fav., what i liked about this poem is its general style composed of repetitions and the word-games made with similar sounding words.
    Additionally, i found it deep and detailed which makes reader to take his/her time to digest what is behind the lines opening new doors to new views at the same time.
    Shortly, good work.

  2. Irfan Shah Says:

    Hazan, thanks for your comments. The goal behind this small exercise of writing a somewhat lyrical puzzle was to try helping the reader interpret the thoughts expressed according to their own circumstances and perceptions.
    I am, however, a bit curious about how did you come to know my friends like the last two lines :).

  3. Hazan Ozgul Says:

    :) well i just made a small visit to your blog and read some of your writings….

  4. Huma Says:

    a touching expression of a mystic :)

  5. Irfan Shah Says:

    Thanks my friend. Not really a mystic or even a poet but whatever I am or I do, is the after effect of the company I keep :P

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Irfan Shah

Basically just another VOP (very ordinary person) in the process of re-discovering himself and the world around him. Twenty-six years old male. Lived most of my life in Pakistan's north-west frontier province. Located in Stockholm, Sweden since a couple of years. Future creative dreams include a plan to write a novel. Any help in the form of suggestions, criticism etc is always welcomed as I really want to improve. Usually prefer keeping a low profile but delighted to know interesting, creative and good-hearted people. Blessings to all.
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