It had been quite a tiring journey for her but thinking of her target made her forget all the distress going on for hours. When she was about to get on the plane, butterflies were fluttering their wings in her stomach; she felt like a little kid on her first day at school. She kept imagining how he would meet her, whether he was excited just like her, whether he was impatient too…Yet she did not know the answers to any of those questions. That was the first time she had ever been abroad and she was told Ontario was really cold at that time of the year.
Finally she collected her bags and managed to get out of the airport. He was supposed to meet her at the gate outside. Her eyes started to go through every figure which even remotely looked like him. It seemed he had not arrived yet, so her impatience kept increasing with every minute spent while waiting. It had been an hour and he was nowhere around. She dialed his cell number with reluctant fingers and she heard that routine female voice giving the bad news that his number was not in use. But how come?! She had called him last week to give the flight details; she had heard his sweet but manly voice just a week ago.
She felt helpless for a moment and was unable to think of what to do due to extreme panic. Then she sat on a bench and searched for something in her handbag. She took out her agenda and went through the pages but her upset face showed that she had forgotten to note down his address. Her cheeks had gone red, heartbeat accelerated and she started to sweat due to the adverse situation she was in. It must be a nightmare, she thought, she would scream and wake up soon in a dark room; but no, she was totally awake and aware of the situation.
She had almost lost all her hopes when a brilliant idea came to her mind. She took her cell out and began to scan all the names in the list and there it was…His flat mate’s number was sparkling just in front of her like a unique stone. She felt as if she found some water in the desert. With a thrill unmatched, she dialed the number and it started to ring. Those few seconds were like centuries to her. Then a strange voice replied:
-Hello.
-Hi, I am Fahad’s friend. I am at the airport right now. I called him but couldn’t reach him.
-Well, he is not at home.
-Ok, and his number does not work, do you know any other number where I can contact him?
- Well, no I don’t know his new number.
- You mean he changed his number?!
- Yes. By the way who are you exactly?
- Hmmm I m his girlfriend, his fiancée actually. May be he told you about me.
-Hmmm. He did not mention you. Where are you from?
-Italy.
- Ahan.
- Ok, but when will he be back home? Any idea?
- He won’t be.
- What do you mean?
- He went back to Pakistan for his marriage!
- What marriage?
- His fiancée was a Pakistani just like himself. And I guess this is a joke what you are doing right now….
She ended the call without saying anything further as she was unable to hear or speak. She was trembling. This was the only sign showing that she was alive; all other senses of hers were all gone. People kept looking at a stranger sitting on the bench hugging a medium-sized bag. Some even asked her what had happened but she did not hear them, did not see them even.
When the night fell, she hardly managed to go to the reservation desk dragging her luggage behind, looked at the official with frozen eyes and said “A ticket to Pakistan please!”








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July 31st, 2008 at 9:40 am
mmmm to sad didnt like it dont write such sad stuff okey
July 31st, 2008 at 9:48 am
I liked this piece Hazan … well written … and a good abrubt way to end it … good stuff
July 31st, 2008 at 9:51 am
lolz
mmmm well i ll try to cheer up my stories but pain is inescapable in love:p
July 31st, 2008 at 10:28 am
Thank you Amir, m really glad:)
July 31st, 2008 at 1:43 pm
I like it cause I hate happy ending, actually I hate endings. A story wihout final enables us to use our imagination. If you’re pessimistic you can create extremly crying end even the writer can’t imagine. Also an optimistic person can imagine a perfectly happy end.
Anyway thank you for the story.
July 31st, 2008 at 1:52 pm
Dear Latif,
Actually that was totally what i had intended while writing this story.
I wanted the readers to rely on their own imagination to shape the end of it whether sad or happy…
Thank you for your kind comment:)
August 5th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
wow..I liked it so much…and the ending is so perfect!!!good job!
August 6th, 2008 at 6:14 pm
Hazan…what I liked most about the story - and you, as writer - was that the central character was portrayed as a strong person; not giving up despite the huge disappointment she suffered. It would’nt have won any favours from me it if she had been left in tears pining after her beloved. The ending opens a host of possibilities - both, in favour and against her desires - all of which are better than not going after what one wants in life and giving up too soon.
August 8th, 2008 at 6:11 pm
@Marwa
Thank you so much:)
@Tahera
You are right about my main character in this story. I tried to picture a woman who is powered by the possibilities just from
the very beginning bcoz she wasnt aware of wht she gona meet while starting her journey and she is stll unaware of wht she will meet at the end of her new journey. Shortly i can say i wanted her to be strong under any disappoinment in life…and i believe the possibilities and the surprises in life will make her stronger:)